What do you think of my story idea?

Your like, the next J. K. Rowling or something if you wrote that in third grade! Let me just say, GENIUS to day the least but in order for me to like it, Jamie would have to realize that she didnt really like Forte, but the other boy that had been in the cellar (i just made him up, dont even have a name for him :) because he was with her through it all even when Forte pretty much dumped Jamie. But yeah, thats because i'm a complete sucker for happy endings. I think you should rewrite it in more detail and try to get it published cuz it really is amazing :D